The following passage was prepared for tomorrow’s Creative Writing class. My task was to introduce a character. I drew heavily from a professor at Michigan State University whom I admired.
Jin’s arrival accounted precisely for the time needed to navigate the receptionist at the State Housing Authority. “Good morning Rhonda,” he said as though they were old friends from Seoul.
“Hello sir,” she said, thrown off by the use of her first name. The Asian man carrying a leather briefcase was not somebody she immediately recognized visually or by the sound of his voice. His suit jacket had an anonymous appearance, as though it could fit on anybody and have no affect on their style.
Jin stopped at the exact distance that was appropriate from her desk. A desk that was in his opinion a barricade between the decisions coming from this office and the people who would could potentially be their strongest allies. Jin did not let this contempt linger in his mind for more than a second and refocused on Rhonda.
“I am here for a meeting with Roger Ballard.” Jin said. Rhonda reached over to page her supervisor. The click of the phone receiver disrupted the lobby’s silence more than his voice. Rhonda suddenly became very self aware of everything around her.
Jin walked only two steps in front of the elevator doors on the eighteenth floor. The din of typing and work-related conversations barely indicated that life existed in this place. The glass door on his right opened as three well-dressed men walked across the lobby to greet him. Before the door shut behind them Jin had greeted each of them “Kevin, Aaron, and Roger. Good to see you.”
In Jin’s view a thing always should conceal its true intention. The pretense of his meeting at the State Housing Authority was to discuss internship opportunities for students in his introductory college level classes. Paperwork filled acres of cabinet space inside the Authority’s headquarters. The three men now shaking Jin’s hand welcomed the possibility of hiring eager college students to sort the unimaginable volume of applications, notices, and memos. They led him to a bland, windowless, yet respectably furnished conference room.
With a few carefully placed signals, Jin could tell if a person was driven by their work. Today’s small talk (that most people subconsciously started with Jin) acted like a litmus test for their commitment to their vocation. At its natural end Jin said, “Gentlemen,” and opened a void in the floor with the breath in his voice. He continued “I would like for you to entertain a proposal.” The vagueness of his request surprised the men hosting the meeting. After a moment of silence which Jin took as consent he said, “I would like for my graduate student Gillian to assist the Governor’s select committee on Housing.”
This silence was different, it was stunned and surprised by the size of the request. Only high level department managers served on the Governor’s select committee.
“A voice is needed to represent the future.” Jin continued to explain. He eventually mentioned how many undergraduates he could send to work in the administrative tasks that Kevin and Aaron had hoped for. Six interns was double the number mentioned in his initial letter.
Jin knew that he would need to convince Roger, the department manager. His brows were slightly furrowed and he fussed with the face of his watch; two indicators of his apprehension toward this proposal. “Roger, I believe we share a purpose, and I wish to help you fulfill it.” Jin said facing his counterpart directly.
Twenty minutes later a burst of boisterous laughter distracted nearby cubicle dwellers. The three men walked with Jin to the elevators, smiles brushed on their faces.
Gillian owed a debt of gratitude to her professor for that meeting. She kept a photo taken at the city’s only Korean restaurant with her classmates and Jin on her desk, facing her visitors. Jin’s broad smile invited conversation from all who saw it, including the governor.
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